Saturday, October 16, 2010

the road

the sea
that is the day
a cautious road
where a thoughtful eye watches
the  deep demanding
troughs of the storm  
longing for a simple back road drive
on a flat calm morning
she watches.


  1. The way you dissect everything-- the subject, light, and textures -- makes a great photo. Poem makes a good match too, but the photo can stand on its own, with room to spare.

  2. I probably meant "bisect". And her expression is mysterious. Not obviously happy, but more importantly, not tritely grim. One wants to know her story.